Storm of Swords – The Slavers

Storm of Swords – The Slavers

Daenerys meets with the slavers of Astapor saying she wishes to buy all of the Unsullied.

This was another piece where there was too much going on dealing with two crowds meeting together. The trick was to choose the best detail without making a mess. To make matters worse, other than saying who is in the scene, there were no descriptions. It didn’t say whether Dani was standing or sitting. Or for that matter, it didn’t even give any details about what the terrace looked like.